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writing 1
According to a USA Today survey, many costumers didn’t interest about the amount of debt they have on credit card. many of costumer look didn’t interest the debt is costumer who more than 60 years old with 81%, on the other hand 46-60 years-old-costumears are only 62 %. The costumers that less than 50% include the 30-45 years-old-costumers and the under 30 years-old-customers. the people who more than 60% didn’t interest with credit card and the people who 44-60 years old is more use credit card than the other people .
writing 2
According to a USA survey, many of customer pay off all credit card bills every month. The people who are 60-years-old-customer are the most costumer who pay off by 87%. Then, the highest position, 68% is 46-60 years-old-customers. on the other hand , there are customers who pay off the bills less than 50%, the 30-45 years-old-customers and the under 30 years-old-customers.

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meeting 2 practice 2

1. Television channel Ksa General Manager Jim Burns said,’’ Not everyone can attend college in the traditional way;therefore,taking course via television will offer many more students the change to earn a college degree.’’
Answer:
Television channel Ksa General Manager Jim Burns said that not everyone could attend college in traditional way ; therefore,taking course via television would offer many more students the change to earn a college degree.

2. Pre-med student Alma Rodriguez said,’’I miss being on campus, but I have to work and take care of my family.’’
Answer:
Pre-med student Alma Rodriguez said that She miss being on campus,but She had to work and take care of her family.

3. Other students said,’’ Last year ,we spent several hours a day commuting to and school. Now we don’t have to do that.’’
Answer:
Other student said that they had spent several hours a day commuting to and from school in the year before. Then, they didn’t have to do that.

4. Computer engineering student Amir Mehdizadeh stated, ‘’I can choose when to study and how to study without pressure.’’ He also said, I will take two more telecourse in the fall.’’
Answer:
Computer engineering student Amir Mehdizadeh state that he could choose when to study and how to study without pressure. He also said that he would take two more telecourse in the fall.

meeting 2 practice 1

1. Dr. Yixuan Ma, a well-known astrophysicist who has been studying black holes, said it is one of the most interesting phenomena we astrophysicist have ever studied.
Answer:
Dr. Yixuan Ma, a well-known astrophysicist who has been studying black holes said, “It is one of the most interesting phenomena we astrophysicist have ever studied.”

2. As she explained in black holes the laws of nature do not seem to apply.
Answer:
As she explained, “In black holes the laws of nature do not seem to apply.”

3. A black hole is a tiny point with the mass 25 times the mass of our sun explained Ms’s associate, Chun-Yi Su. Black holes are created by the death of a very large star she stated.
Answer:
“A black hole is a tiny point with the mass 25 times the mass of our sun,” explained Ms’s associate, Chun-Yi Su, “black holes are created by the death of a very large star she stated.”

4. It is an invisible vacuum cleaner in space she added with tremendous gravitational pull.
Answer:
“It is an invisible vacuum cleaner in space,” she added with tremendous gravitational pull.

5. According to Dr. Su, if a person falls into a black hole, he will eventually be crushed due to the tremendous gravitational forces.
Answer:
According to Dr. Su,” If a person falls into a black hole, he will eventually be crushed due to the tremendous gravitational forces.”

6. Time will slow down for him as he approaches the event horizon she said and when he reaches the event horizon, time will stand still for him.
Answer:
“Time will slow down for him as he approaches the event horizon,” she said, ”and when he reaches the event horizon, time will stand still for him.”

Meeting 1
Practice 1
——–1. Smoking is relaxing and, therefore,enjoyable.
Answer: Opinion
——–2. Dr.kathleen parker, a well-know cancer specialist,recently admittedin an interview,’’Although I see the harmful effects of smoking nearly every day in my work, I still enjoy relaxing with cigarette after dinner.’’
Answer: Fact,Need further Support
——–3. Early in the next decade, more women than man will die of lung cancer, according to the American cancer society.
Answer: Fact, Need further Support
——–4. Smoking is attracting more and more adults.
Answer: Opinion
——–5. According to a recent New York Times articles,cigarette smoking is increasing among adults in their forties as well as among the college educated and those earning more than 35,000 annually.
Answer: Fact
——–6. Red-light runners must take a driver’s education class.then they will become safer driver’s.
Answer: Opinion
——-7. Red-Light runners cause scores of accidents , including deaths and injuries as well as million of dollars in damages.
Answer: Fact, Need further Support
——-8. Red-Light runners should have their driver’s licenses suspended for period of time.
Answer: Opinion
——-9. Nationwide,the number of red-light running accidents increased 18 percent from 1991 throught 1998.in 1991,2,425 deaths resulted, and in 199, the number rose to 2,686.
Answer: Fact

SUMMARY OF ESSAY WRITING:

SUMMARY OF ESSAY WRITING:
Essay is usually a student assignment especially in academia. most student can not make a good essay Essay but it does not mean that the student can not learn how to make a good essay. This materials will be explains abot essay writing. Essay are shorter pieces of writing which offering the student to develop their skills in analysis, an idea, with the direction. There are four genres of essay: Description,narration,exposition and argumentation . and the method consist of:
1. An introductory paragraph
2. Three evidentiary body paragraphs
3. A conclusion

Expository Essay
This essay needs a factual evidence to support the statement , and a logical transitions between the introduction, body and conclusion. And student must explain the idea more detail and clearly. A clear thesis statement adding in the first paragraph of essay. And in expository essay we must write clearly , so it can make sure the reader and leaving no doubt about our essay.

Descriptive Essay
This essay describe about something such as a person, a place, an object ,etc. Before you begin to describe something, firstly you must make a brainstorm by arraged a descriptive list for each one.and do not forget to add an noun sense in the essay such as a sound, a taste, a feeling, etc. Because it make a reader impression and imagine easily with your description.

Narrative Essay
Write a narrative essay is not always as telling a story, but we can write an experiental, personal, etc. when we are not write about story , Make sure your writing consist of: an introduction,plot,charaters,setting,climax and conclusion. For example when you must make a report . The essay must structural and and focus to provide an information .The important things is your essay is must be organized.

Argumentative essays
This essay needs a strong evidence to make a reader believe with the essay. You need a research with collects data with observation experiment , etc. Firstly you must explained why your topic is very important to the reader. Then, you must persuasive the reader with your detail evidence. Some detail evidence is important to support thesis statement. And for conclusion : do not add new information, you need add review the main point and the thesis.

ESSAY OUTLINE

ESSAY OUTLINE:
STUDY OVERSEAS

I.Introduction
Thesis statement: Opportunity to study overseas with choose the countries which offering a good education and scholarship.

II. Body
A.Three reasons for students to study overseas
1. Quality of education
a.Rank school /university in the world
b. The famous school/ university in the world
2. Career development
a.opportunity to get a proper job
b.Networking job
3. Individual charateristic
a. Get a new experience
b. Learning other culture and tradition

B. Scholarship which offered by other country
1. Kinds of Scholarship
a. Full Scholarship
b. Half Scholarship
2. A country which offering scholarship.
a.Continent of America
b. Continent of Europe
c.Continent of Asia

III.Conclusion:
Nowadays, we can get information to study abroad easily such as using an access internet or ask to people who had ever been study abroad. Hopefully, with study overseas we can get an opportunity to our life such as get a proper job. An experience , etc. A wise man said: There is a will, there is a way. So, do the best for our future, with a reach good opportunity in our life.

Higher Education

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How many people who think that education is an important?How many people who realize the important of education?. Education is of on an important things in our life. But, there is still people who didn’t realize the meaning of education. Especially in Indonesia, There are many reasons why many of people can’t get acces for education.

First is about a money, education in Indonesia is so expensive. I clearly remember when i graduated from senior high school,many of my friend who could’t continue their study to the university. Because they hadn’t much money. It’s an ironic. It’s supposed to be a right of citizen to get acces for education. Secondly, there is an underestimate that a woman should be house of wife. It does mean that a woman has’t a duty to get a higher education. Actually there are many reasons which I could’t explained.When we are talking about quality of education in Indonesia. There is a imbalanced quality of education in every province. Especially when we are see many buildings school that damage in rural area. Many of children who live in rural area can’t get acces for education. And the minimum amount of school and university is still one of problem in our education. Based on statictic data only 4,8 million people who can continue their study to the university from people’s who 19-24 years old. Its does mean that only 18,4 percent student’s . it is a rational?. For a rich people they can send their children to the private school which has good quality even most of them send their children to study to the abroad . How about a poor people who has a children?.I think a scholarship that referred by government is not enough. Why? .Because They are need more than a scholarship , but they need a qualitity of  education .Honestly I didn’t come from a rich family.but, I have a high motivation to reach all my dream.When I was junior high school I thought that I must continue my study to the university.and it’s not easy for me to get a money to pay my tuition. My family and I must work hard to get a money. Whatever my condition  my family always make sure that Im still study at state university of Jakarta. I thakfull of God. Because he give me an oppurtunity to get a higher education. And my friend who only graduated from senior high school, most of them who work as a labour on factory. They must work hard with a minimum salary. So I can say that our education has an impact of our job . A wise man said that education is the best invest in our life. So I can conclude that higher education=proper job=proper life.